WOW, POW, that is fucking horrible!! What I liked best were the odd touches of compassion:
"I gently fed him and bathed him and left him to his first night of completely uninterrupted slumber in the year he had been with me."
"They shouted useless words of encouragement, and wondered why he showed no sign of having heard them."
You held my half-horny, half-appalled attention to the end, because you know how to write.
Oh, your bastard predator thought he was being so clever, didn't he, deliberately choosing a chat-room with no facility for keeping a record of conversations?
What he didn't bank on was that poor Mike would be so dazzled by him that he always copied the contents of the chat window before he closed it, and pasted them on his facebook account as messages to himself.
Mike's big bro Tom, and the Feds, have both read those messages, and your predator better pray the Feds reach him before Tom does. Because when Mike was found, Tom and his pals started visiting chat-rooms and flirting with strangers in the hope that the sicko might want to strike again. And they might have made a breakthrough, because one of them has just been invited to share a "fun-filled fantasy weekend".
The whole crew of them intend keeping that rendezvous.
The day after Mike was found Tom visited him in hospital and stood looking down at his poor, broken, violated body. Tears were coursing down Tom's cheeks and though his teeth were tightly-clenched, he was still uttering little sobs and whimpers of grief. He reached out to brush the backs of his fingers tenderly against Mike's cheek, and Mike gave a violent shudder and his chest began to heave. This filled Tom with such anguish and despair that he just threw back his head and howled like a dog.
Now Tom doesn't have a heart any longer. He has a burning core of rage which is sustained by his craving for revenge. It will be a terrible thing for the predator if he falls into Tom's hands.
Good catch! No, the similarity between this victim and the "Matt" character from Hopeless 2 is incidental, not something I planned. I actually had to go look up who "Mat" was in Hopeless 2 because I didn't remember him. Turns out he doesn't even appear! He's only referred to secondhand. You have a keen eye for detail, Adam.
i had some communication with a man who blatantly wanted to do this to me...except the part about the nursing home.. lost contact and wish i had not... this is sad/sick as can be...and still so appealing...
WOW, POW, that is fucking horrible!!
ReplyDeleteWhat I liked best were the odd touches of compassion:
"I gently fed him and bathed him and left him to his first night of completely uninterrupted slumber in the year he had been with me."
"They shouted useless words of encouragement, and wondered why he showed no sign of having heard them."
You held my half-horny, half-appalled attention to the end, because you know how to write.
Oh, your bastard predator thought he was being so clever, didn't he, deliberately choosing a chat-room with no facility for keeping a record of conversations?
What he didn't bank on was that poor Mike would be so dazzled by him that he always copied the contents of the chat window before he closed it, and pasted them on his facebook account as messages to himself.
Mike's big bro Tom, and the Feds, have both read those messages, and your predator better pray the Feds reach him before Tom does. Because when Mike was found, Tom and his pals started visiting chat-rooms and flirting with strangers in the hope that the sicko might want to strike again. And they might have made a breakthrough, because one of them has just been invited to share a "fun-filled fantasy weekend".
The whole crew of them intend keeping that rendezvous.
The day after Mike was found Tom visited him in hospital and stood looking down at his poor, broken, violated body. Tears were coursing down Tom's cheeks and though his teeth were tightly-clenched, he was still uttering little sobs and whimpers of grief. He reached out to brush the backs of his fingers tenderly against Mike's cheek, and Mike gave a violent shudder and his chest began to heave. This filled Tom with such anguish and despair that he just threw back his head and howled like a dog.
Now Tom doesn't have a heart any longer. He has a burning core of rage which is sustained by his craving for revenge. It will be a terrible thing for the predator if he falls into Tom's hands.
Is he “mat” in hopeless 2?
ReplyDeleteGood catch! No, the similarity between this victim and the "Matt" character from Hopeless 2 is incidental, not something I planned. I actually had to go look up who "Mat" was in Hopeless 2 because I didn't remember him. Turns out he doesn't even appear! He's only referred to secondhand. You have a keen eye for detail, Adam.
DeleteMatt is one of my favourite victims. When I was reading the story for the first time I started fantacizing about owning a "Matt".
Deletei had some communication with a man who blatantly wanted to do this to me...except the part about the nursing home..
ReplyDeletelost contact and wish i had not...
this is sad/sick as can be...and still so appealing...
Reminds me of One by Metallica or Mercy by Shawn Mendes
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