turned down a trick tonight to finish this story and i came twice. btw i am eighty years old. as long as there are writers like you out there i am sure i will be able to keep it up at ninety.
To the eighty-year-old who turned down a trick to read this... thank you. You are very kind to say that. Really, the story could have waited until you had a spare moment, but I am touched and honored that you chose to read it instead.
Thanks awfully for your work. It provides me with a deliciously complex excitement and all satisfying accompanying juices; compelling, very well orchestrated, altogether lovely. For me,it compares to de Sade ( especially the 120 Days of Sodom) but that seems perfunctory compared to your material. I'm also very aroused by certain bits of Dennis Cooper but there's far too much sentiment. Your perpetrators are amazing in their sang froid and their(your) way with technical inventions is splendid. It also pleases me that the victims struggle and find no pleasure (unlike conventional SM) although an unexpected erection is a nice touch. This is my first posting but I might have replied to any of your previous offerings. I've read five. Keep them coming. You have a real gift.
Thank you so much. I am delighted that you share my taste for victims who "struggle and find no pleasure" - there's so much more master/slave material out there than captor/victim. Nice to encounter someone who enjoys (fictional) non-consent... though, as you say, an unexpected erection makes for a nice change of pace.
I loved so much the fingernail torture. Very well written, detailed and long... a favorite of mine, but altogether a great story, really awesome. Thanks for it.
Send me an e-mail. I'll dig the various parts of "The Educator" out of the dusty basement of my computer and send them to you in reply.
The story starts off great, but I think the author didn't have a clear ending in mind when he started writing, because the narrative gradually grows less and less focused and eventually just peters out, never really reaching a satisfying end. Before that unsatisfying un-end, though, there's a lot of hot material!
Saffran, my e-mail is included at the top of each story, but disguised in a way that hopefully defeats bots, at least for the moment. Quoting from above... "For spam prevention, an animal name has been added to the author's e-mail address. Remove the animal name to get the actual address: POWauthor zebra at yahoo dot com."
Fantastic story. I found the rape scene beyond belief good and that finger torture. You have a real gift. BTW I would love to find your source material the educator. I will email shortly. But keep up the great work.
Amazing!
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ReplyDeleteMMMMM! Sounds like the ultimate cock torture :) I want some!
ReplyDeleteturned down a trick tonight to finish this story and i came twice. btw i am eighty years old. as long as there are writers like you out there i am sure i will be able to keep it up at ninety.
ReplyDeleteTo the eighty-year-old who turned down a trick to read this... thank you. You are very kind to say that. Really, the story could have waited until you had a spare moment, but I am touched and honored that you chose to read it instead.
ReplyDeleteThanks awfully for your work. It provides me with a deliciously complex excitement and all satisfying accompanying juices; compelling, very well orchestrated, altogether lovely. For me,it compares to de Sade ( especially the 120 Days of Sodom) but that seems perfunctory compared to your material. I'm also very aroused by certain bits of Dennis Cooper but there's far too much sentiment. Your perpetrators are amazing in their sang froid and their(your) way with technical inventions is splendid. It also pleases me that the victims struggle and find no pleasure (unlike conventional SM) although an unexpected erection is a nice touch. This is my first posting but I might have replied to any of your previous offerings. I've read five. Keep them coming. You have a real gift.
ReplyDeleteYours in Death and Transfiguration,
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ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I am delighted that you share my taste for victims who "struggle and find no pleasure" - there's so much more master/slave material out there than captor/victim. Nice to encounter someone who enjoys (fictional) non-consent... though, as you say, an unexpected erection makes for a nice change of pace.
- POW
I loved so much the fingernail torture. Very well written, detailed and long... a favorite of mine, but altogether a great story, really awesome. Thanks for it.
ReplyDeleteThis was something similar to what I experienced, except for the modifications to myself anyway!
ReplyDeleteI'd love to see "The Educator" by havsub that you said was the inspiration for this
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DeleteSend me an e-mail. I'll dig the various parts of "The Educator" out of the dusty basement of my computer and send them to you in reply.
The story starts off great, but I think the author didn't have a clear ending in mind when he started writing, because the narrative gradually grows less and less focused and eventually just peters out, never really reaching a satisfying end. Before that unsatisfying un-end, though, there's a lot of hot material!
- POW
What is your email, POW?
ReplyDeleteSaffran, my e-mail is included at the top of each story, but disguised in a way that hopefully defeats bots, at least for the moment. Quoting from above... "For spam prevention, an animal name has been added to the author's e-mail address. Remove the animal name to get the actual address: POWauthor zebra at yahoo dot com."
ReplyDeleteFantastic story. I found the rape scene beyond belief good and that finger torture. You have a real gift. BTW I would love to find your source material the educator. I will email shortly. But keep up the great work.
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