So different and exquisitely written. You can almost, only almost, predict the path the story is taking but like David you really don't want it to end.
Love the text adventure aspect of his thought processes, and the cheeky references too. The whole story thoroughly scares and excites some carnal part of me.
So different and exquisitely written. You can almost, only almost, predict the path the story is taking but like David you really don't want it to end.
ReplyDeleteoh - i love the astory, even if this is not really the fantasy i have ..
ReplyDeleteIncredible story - many thanks. Enjoyed every second of the read - and will let my mind finish this level.
ReplyDeleteSo awesome. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteLove the text adventure aspect of his thought processes, and the cheeky references too. The whole story thoroughly scares and excites some carnal part of me.
ReplyDeleteSuch a fun story. Kudos to you again.
ReplyDeleteA friend sent me this and I read the whole thing in one sitting. Fantastic job.
ReplyDeleteSo happy that you left it unfinished!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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