A hot and well written story! I really liked the contrast between the three clients of Colin. Ken who was somewhat clumsy but at least got a satisfying encounter and through the app a vision of what he could become if he invested some effort. Jaime who got nothing but a frustrating encounter because he didn't even try to learn the basics of the app. And Evan who not only put in the effort to learn as much as he could about the app but also to create several intense scenes. I also liked the concept of the different types of Leathermen(with their diffent values). There was only one type where I don't know what to expect the Inkatha (Zulu Leatherman). Could you please enlighten me? I am divided about whether or not I would like to see a continuation of this story. There are so many questions open. Will Ken become the leatherman the app has shown him? Will Jaime simply forget about the and leave the story? Or will he become the next 'victim' of VRansomWear? Will Evan create some even more extrem scenes? And what about Colin, will he have an encounter that will make him quit for good or will he continue until he has earned enough to retire? So many questions that want answers but also say "Leave it to your imagination" that I can't decide what I want. So to say it again a really hat and well written story. I hope you will continue writing new stories, and perhaps continue this one.
Stefan, thank you for all the kind words and the great ideas.
I'm leaving the door open for other stories set in this same world, but at this point I don't have anything specific in mind. This is a terrific world to set stories in, rich with possibilities, and I have to give all the credit for it to MetalBond (www.metalbondnyc.com), who came up with the idea of "Pokemon Go, Bondage Edition". The details in VRansomwear are my take on it, which differs somewhat from what he had in mind, but either way, there's a vast, vast number of possible stories that could be set in it.
The Inkatha... the word is Zulu for "crown". There's nothing particularly significant about this character. I was just trying for a diverse mix of hot men. There are so many different ways for a guy to look and still be sexy; I wanted to include one with deep, dark, almost blue-black skin along with all the Tom Of Finland types.
Ken's next steps are hard to predict... sometimes an experience can be life-altering, other times it's just a vacation and your humdrum life soon resumes its normal course. I don't know which this will be for him.
Jaime is not going to realize what he missed out on. He doesn't have the self-introspective capacity to realize he might be wrong about anything. I like your suggestion (also made by one of the MetalBond readers): he needs to get a suit of his own!
I imagine Evan is going to become a serious player. He's got money, interest, and the talent to take advantage of what the VRealWorld can do.
As for Colin... yeah... where to go next? That I'm going to decline to answer... for now, at least!
Thank you for the reply POW. I remember having read MetalBondNYC's request for a story writer back in summer, but I didn't think much about it until I saw your story and read your comment on the last part. And I agree with you this whole setting offers a plethora of possibilities for stories. As for the Zulu Leatherman, I thought it might refer to more than just his appearance. Like the Blueball (Police Leatherman) beside a police uniform implies some cop play (light bondage with cuffs, body search, interrogation ...). I have an additional question: does VRealWorld offer long term options? I mean do the only arrange one night stands or do they allow for users to have longer relationships?
Damn! The more I read, the more I wanted to be Colin in that suit! And I probably won't be asking for an unlock code any time soon on the second go-round.
Finally a new story. Only took a year:)
ReplyDeleteYeah... real life keeps intruding, dagnabbit!
DeleteA hot and well written story! I really liked the contrast between the three clients of Colin. Ken who was somewhat clumsy but at least got a satisfying encounter and through the app a vision of what he could become if he invested some effort. Jaime who got nothing but a frustrating encounter because he didn't even try to learn the basics of the app. And Evan who not only put in the effort to learn as much as he could about the app but also to create several intense scenes. I also liked the concept of the different types of Leathermen(with their diffent values). There was only one type where I don't know what to expect the Inkatha (Zulu Leatherman). Could you please enlighten me?
ReplyDeleteI am divided about whether or not I would like to see a continuation of this story. There are so many questions open. Will Ken become the leatherman the app has shown him? Will Jaime simply forget about the and leave the story? Or will he become the next 'victim' of VRansomWear? Will Evan create some even more extrem scenes? And what about Colin, will he have an encounter that will make him quit for good or will he continue until he has earned enough to retire? So many questions that want answers but also say "Leave it to your imagination" that I can't decide what I want.
So to say it again a really hat and well written story. I hope you will continue writing new stories, and perhaps continue this one.
Cheers
Stefan
Stefan, thank you for all the kind words and the great ideas.
ReplyDeleteI'm leaving the door open for other stories set in this same world, but at this point I don't have anything specific in mind. This is a terrific world to set stories in, rich with possibilities, and I have to give all the credit for it to MetalBond (www.metalbondnyc.com), who came up with the idea of "Pokemon Go, Bondage Edition". The details in VRansomwear are my take on it, which differs somewhat from what he had in mind, but either way, there's a vast, vast number of possible stories that could be set in it.
The Inkatha... the word is Zulu for "crown". There's nothing particularly significant about this character. I was just trying for a diverse mix of hot men. There are so many different ways for a guy to look and still be sexy; I wanted to include one with deep, dark, almost blue-black skin along with all the Tom Of Finland types.
Ken's next steps are hard to predict... sometimes an experience can be life-altering, other times it's just a vacation and your humdrum life soon resumes its normal course. I don't know which this will be for him.
Jaime is not going to realize what he missed out on. He doesn't have the self-introspective capacity to realize he might be wrong about anything. I like your suggestion (also made by one of the MetalBond readers): he needs to get a suit of his own!
I imagine Evan is going to become a serious player. He's got money, interest, and the talent to take advantage of what the VRealWorld can do.
As for Colin... yeah... where to go next? That I'm going to decline to answer... for now, at least!
Thanks.
Thank you for the reply POW. I remember having read MetalBondNYC's request for a story writer back in summer, but I didn't think much about it until I saw your story and read your comment on the last part. And I agree with you this whole setting offers a plethora of possibilities for stories.
DeleteAs for the Zulu Leatherman, I thought it might refer to more than just his appearance. Like the Blueball (Police Leatherman) beside a police uniform implies some cop play (light bondage with cuffs, body search, interrogation ...).
I have an additional question: does VRealWorld offer long term options? I mean do the only arrange one night stands or do they allow for users to have longer relationships?
Cheers
Stefan
super hot , cool ideas, thanks , very good story
ReplyDeleteDamn! The more I read, the more I wanted to be Colin in that suit! And I probably won't be asking for an unlock code any time soon on the second go-round.
ReplyDeleteI love your writing!