Hmm. Interesting question. I guess I would have to say torture by heat is not really a favorite, but it has its merits. May I point you to "Keep It Up" at http://powauthor.blogspot.com/2013/09/keep-it-up.html ? It's not fire, but the end result is pretty much the same.
Just curious but will there be a part two to this ? Something that tells what happens to Ron . Maybe he wants to see how he handles being on that end . He thought about it throughout the story . Maybe Keller gets him to be masochist and he loves it .
Great pacing. Very subtlety written. Absolutely no sympathy for the two men, only wished, in some cases, more substantive programmes had been carried out. I was all for hanging as the final coda with each man holding the rope to open the trap door. As to Ron? He was and would get what he wanted. Or perhaps Keller will grow bored and hang him.
Best. SM story. Ever. I wish I could ask you to write another story better than this, but that's unfortunately impossible. Also, thank you for including some GP scenes!
I am a Neurosurgeon. While with two fingers I can apply pain more than most could understand. That said, what is described here is so much more intense, so much locked in anticipatory question....truly the apogee of application of pain. Brilliant writing with an end, predicted early on, that is even better than the promised closure. One thing, Ron is a fool, the perfection of a concealed submissive who willingly sells his own pain when, with a bit of negotiation, could have found just a painful a finale for both....sadly ending in their demise but then....wasn't that actually the point? Watching their subjects snuff each other was only analogous to what they wished to do to each other.
Subtle, expertly explores what one man will do for what he imagines is all he wants while two other men discover what they'll do to avoid what they know is coming. Specific actions are there only to serve as a mirror for what will happen but is never quite specified. The length, the casual conversation, the necessity to switch, the discovery what really is erotic versus what is just physical action and all in a blithely told story that superficially seems almost necessary. And, of course, the ending which justifies the whole piece as it's a kaleidoscope of all that has happened reminiscent of Shakespeare's comment that, "What's past is prologue"....
Breathtakingly Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteMagnificent and exciting in so many ways.
ReplyDeleteOmg i want to be ron so bad it hurts, id give up my freedom my life my will all of it just to have an experience like that
ReplyDeleteVery good story
ReplyDeleteIn your stories there is never torture with fire or hot iron.
ReplyDeleteDon´t you like this Kind of torture?
Hmm. Interesting question. I guess I would have to say torture by heat is not really a favorite, but it has its merits. May I point you to "Keep It Up" at http://powauthor.blogspot.com/2013/09/keep-it-up.html ? It's not fire, but the end result is pretty much the same.
DeleteJust curious but will there be a part two to this ? Something that tells what happens to Ron . Maybe he wants to see how he handles being on that end . He thought about it throughout the story . Maybe Keller gets him to be masochist and he loves it .
ReplyDeleteI don't have any plans to write a followup to this story, but I don't ever rule out a sequel.
DeleteIt sounds like you have a good idea of where you think the story might go next. Want to try your hand at setting it down in print?
Great pacing. Very subtlety written. Absolutely no sympathy for the two men, only wished, in some cases, more substantive programmes had been carried out. I was all for hanging as the final coda with each man holding the rope to open the trap door. As to Ron? He was and would get what he wanted. Or perhaps Keller will grow bored and hang him.
ReplyDeleteBest. SM story. Ever.
ReplyDeleteI wish I could ask you to write another story better than this, but that's unfortunately impossible.
Also, thank you for including some GP scenes!
I am a Neurosurgeon. While with two fingers I can apply pain more than most could understand. That said, what is described here is so much more intense, so much locked in anticipatory question....truly the apogee of application of pain. Brilliant writing with an end, predicted early on, that is even better than the promised closure. One thing, Ron is a fool, the perfection of a concealed submissive who willingly sells his own pain when, with a bit of negotiation, could have found just a painful a finale for both....sadly ending in their demise but then....wasn't that actually the point? Watching their subjects snuff each other was only analogous to what they wished to do to each other.
ReplyDeleteSubtle, expertly explores what one man will do for what he imagines is all he wants while two other men discover what they'll do to avoid what they know is coming. Specific actions are there only to serve as a mirror for what will happen but is never quite specified. The length, the casual conversation, the necessity to switch, the discovery what really is erotic versus what is just physical action and all in a blithely told story that superficially seems almost necessary. And, of course, the ending which justifies the whole piece as it's a kaleidoscope of all that has happened reminiscent of Shakespeare's comment that, "What's past is prologue"....
ReplyDeleteBrilliant story. I love the description of both rape and torture. You are a true master of this craft.
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