Friday, January 1, 2010

Hopeless 2


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4 comments:

  1. Well done narrative with ample pain and torture and sex but considerable humanity as well.

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  2. I once survived this type of experience, but without the modifications to myself and with the assistance of my powerful Wiccan order, brought down the evil cult leader who created his own house of pain.

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  3. Just amazing... The writing was outstanding.. had me gripped to the very end. I didn't want it to end...

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  4. After reading Code of Silence this one hits even harder. Derek tried to do what Eddie does in this chapter but ended up like Mike from Noose Training. I'd love a sequel that explores the aftermath of Eddie's texts and what becomes of the victims and trainers.

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